Foundation ProductionIn the third draft I made sure that the writing was all aligned properly, mainly the hook towards the upper right of the page. I also added a hook asking a direct question, ‘That is the best dance artist of all time?’ For this hook I used the same effect as I used for the title, white writing on the black background and black writing on the white background, this helps to define the image.
I also smoothened the main image by using the blur tool; this makes the sides of the image less jagged. I also added another bullet point to the top of the page between Eric Prydz and Crookers.
I also moved the barcode further into the corner to make it more discreet.